I liked how you set this poem up, showing how things have changed over time and how you'd on from someone you used to love. Interesting way of expression especially the middle stanza. I'd put 'you're no longer my desire' by itself and just have a period instead of an ellipsis. I think it'll have more power by itself. But the line does definitely hit the reader. Nicely done

First of all... A huge compliment for stepping out of the rhyming...
What took you so long? Look at what you've created!!

This poem is so brilliant....

If I was you I would mail it to the person who its written for...becuase you know this is such a BURN.
The ending...I was like Auch!....

Loved the use of 6 months then 3 months...made it all so much real!

Impressive Chels Bels! Well done..

I'll probably come back and read this....

This poem is a treat to all those who have moved on from horrible relationships!...

*-hugs-*

Mwaaa!