by anonymous Mar 9, 2011
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Is this how it is always going to be? |
A beautiful encouraging message to hold onto God's covenant, indeed He will help us follow that path, that plan for us....just fix your misspelling of "head", and my only other suggestion would be to find a stronger simile than "silent as a mouse", I felt you could have used more of a spiritual one... |