Yes. This is what I call a damn good poem. Excuse my French :] First of all using insomnia as a title was perfect. I have insomnia and I was expecting the worn out poem about not being able to sleep and restless nights blah blah but you blew my mind with this. Very creative and just bursting with life. I read your profile and you are very wrong. It seems like this poem came very easy to you. The flow was amazing and very constant. Your diction was simple yet beautiful. I loved the varied syntax as well. A very wonderful piece indeed. Please keep writing. you have too because this was just too good to be a one time thing. Keep it up :] Nik

Pretty good. I can feel the frustration in the words.

Pretty good. I can feel the frustration in the words.