Sweeter than a Warm Breeze

by JaM   Mar 9, 2011


Promises spoken through soft words,
Of fantasies full of divine pleasures,
Your Grace, he says like a Queen,
I bring you these precious treasures.

I await my time alone with him,
Accepting of these offerings he brings,
Running wild with imagination.
I eagerly await these things.

Helpless to his powerful influence,
Surprised at my unusual behaviour,
Hoping to break this extended curse,
Praying you could be my saviour.

These feelings involve more than lust,
As you seem to have a heart of gold,
Comfort comes to my thoughts,
Through the strength of your hold.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Redangelwings

    This is a very sweet and sensual poem Jamie. First of all the title drew my attention because love is a warm breeze :). It drew the reader in and your words make me stay. I love the first line because of the word soft. Love and whispers would make any heart flutter when spoken by the one you love. Imagination can run wild and pleasues are fantasies are always lovely. It's always nice to feel like queen :). You always want to bealone with the one you love everyday. I love how youconnect the lines here. Gifts are sweet but the gift of his love is always better. :). For me being slalone and just holding hands or even cuddling is the best feeling.

    I love the third stanza as love makes you feel differently. You never know what you will do. AlthoughI do agree love can be your savior bbut it can also go the other way. But the way you write this it makes me think you have been in love with this person for a long time :). We always fall in love with the person we see. The holding you I like and I like the way you ended it. You love this person so much. I love the rhyming here and I love the flow. Great poem ! 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    What love can not do?

    This was a sweet piece, I enjoyed reading the rhymes.

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