by Lauren
I really love this poem. You wrote through emotion. It was well written with so much heart and soul in it. |
by Baby Rainbow
Wow chels, very deep. I like the way you used the rain and the tear drops, worked very well. The imagery you penned here was so touching, like little clips from a movie when you see the girl just pouring her heart out but no one is around to see it. Just hiding away in her room with her comfort things ( chocolate, dvds etc ) |