Comments : Blame it on the rain

  • 13 years ago

    by Lauren

    I really love this poem. You wrote through emotion. It was well written with so much heart and soul in it.

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Wow chels, very deep. I like the way you used the rain and the tear drops, worked very well. The imagery you penned here was so touching, like little clips from a movie when you see the girl just pouring her heart out but no one is around to see it. Just hiding away in her room with her comfort things ( chocolate, dvds etc )

    Such a sad poem, and the strength it took to write this and pretend that everything was ok, relating to the title where the world will not know you cried because you blame it on the rain.

    Does make me wonder about this person who hurt you so bad, and know one day they will not be worth a penny of your thoughts or ink.

    Great work as always. Loved the title. x