Comments : Your Mountain

  • 13 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Being pushed of a mountain really is a good example of being pushed away by someone. And all the while your falling thinking about why they don't want you, what did you do? I've been through this as well and it really is heart breaking. But after you fall, you'll still be alive. And what doesn't kill you only makes you stronger!
    Nice job!
    Chelsey

  • 13 years ago

    by White Orchid

    I loved the analogy of the mountain, it was brilliant!! It made this poem very real and love the emotion in it as well. Great job! :)