This is great! I liked the repetition you used, made it flow perfectly. The imagery you've set couldn't be better. This poem is full of emotions, i loved reading every bit of it. Keep up the good work! :)

Wonderfully Penned!!!

This someone special truly sounds like an angel. The flow is smooth and behind each line there are deep sentiments too..nicely done! It also looks like you have done a loop poem..liked the read :)

I loved the structure. . . A loop poem.
Its the first time I see one. Its interesting and also I liked the emotion.

my favorite lines:

"Someone who knows how to read
Read the writings of an inner soul"

"A heart that is full of love, soft and gentle
Gentle but pretends to be rock hard"

Oh my, the emotion in this piece is wow. Amazing. I am absolutely speechless thanks to this piece.