by Sylvia
Austin, this is a nice change from the nature poems you normally do. Reading it I feel it is sweet and nice and hopeful. I also get the feeling of a heart about to burst with love for another. Good job. |
Austin, |
This was very sweet, I'm glad you're able to feel this emotion and speak of it through your poetry. It's beautiful and something much different from what you normally write but I like it. It's very fresh & lovely. |
by Lady Nik
AWWWH this is cute tooo!! :] I'm glad you're breaking your habit. And I don't mean the nature poems because those are your best but I mean you're style as far as writing goes. I liked that this poem was free verse because I believe love is that way as well. The way this poem was written helps me see how much you care for this person. It helps me see that she's different from the rest. I liked the diction you used as well. Very vivid but not too fictional. You wrote from the heart and that's a beautiful thing. Like Temps said it is a very fresh piece. Thanks for sharing deary. Keep it up. -Nik |
by Meena Krish
Words can't describe how I feel |
by Sunshine
Words can't describe how I feel |
by mira
Wow |