Why even care?

by Nikki   Mar 15, 2011


The pain is so strong,
Somedays I don't how to deal,
Somedays I just want to drink my feelings away,
with a bottle of vodka,
Somedays seem better than others
I just don't think things will get better,
I just know the pain won't ever stop,
and the tears won't stop falling,
And eventually it will be something I'm used too,
I try to turn to god,
but I'm into deep,
It seems like nothing will work.
And most days I feel like nobody even cares,
Do they even see how much pain I really am in?
I wish they could look me in the eyes,
and see all the pain within me,
Just one look.
I try to let people into my world,
but when I try it seems like they don't even care,
I try to express my feelings,
But it seems as if they never care,
I tell myself," why even bother"?
A person can only take too much,until they break,
I broke weeks ago,
But I still feel the pain each and every day,
The day I see his smiling face again,
and talk to him,
I think will be the day,
my brightest smile will be back.

I miss you...

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  • 13 years ago

    by Soft Parade

    I have to agree with The Poetess, the poem never took off for me, it felt self absorbed which can be the intention but this did not flow quite the way the title suggests. Pain never came trhough because of the fillers, it felt more of a frustration than pain.

    There is some creative writing there too which would be better highlighted with less filler words, I think it has potential too show your talent with a revise.

    Good work getting the feelings onto the page, a little tweaking and you will have a genuine article of grief on your hands.

  • 13 years ago

    by RObC

    Good work. Never give up on hope and you can never be in too deep for God to help he loves you so much and all you have to do is call out to Him and he will hear you.

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