by Stephen Parker Mar 16, 2011
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
Winter's chill lingers still |
by Soft Parade
I feel the consistent rhyme took away from the poem though as I found myself skipping ahead each line to imagine what the rhyme would be. |
I thought the idea here was simple to grasp, but the individual images were a bit hazy in your wording....if you indicate natural breaks, it would be clearer to read and smoother overall. |