by Melpomene Mar 16, 2011
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
'neath sugar snowflakes |
by Soft Parade
'neath sugar snowflakes |
I loved how the title lead into the poem, that was unique... it took me a second to pick up on it haha. Only suggestion is I would make a stronger pause after wild flowers, like perhaps a dash? I just feel like it should be more than a comma but it's up to you! Otherwise, brilliant and wonderful imagery Mel. |