:] AWWWWH that's cute. I think everyone does this at some point. Locks away from the world because someone pushed them to the edge. But even though we've been hurt so badly we still have hope that one day someone will save us from the past and help us walk into the future. I see that message very clearly in this poem. Although it was a simple piece you were able to spice it up with some very good diction. I loved the tone of the piece and how it followed the lines of the poem. At first the tone was sad and a little somber. But once this new person came in your words spoke the hope you wrote about. I loved the imagery as well. I could picture you in a room by yourself waiting for someone to find you and give you the love you need. Great work indeed. :] -Nik

I agree. I was surprised too! This whole poem was great. Waiting for that person to come and then never letting them go. I really liked the feel of the poem. Nice work. Glad u posted more poems on here. :-)

I feel like this for someone 5/5...I got poems too if you want to see them

I love reading your poetry. They always inspire me and give me hope and knowledge..that i am not as alone as i thought and neither are my friends who have felt scared from time to time. Even though you write of sadness, loss and general bleh feelings, you write it all perfectly..