by Lady Nik Mar 17, 2011
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
Single file iron roads |
Wow! this poem in my opinion is by far the best one I have read by you. I cannot fault it. I don't really have a lot to say other than weldone |
by AJ
I agree with Nano, using commas in the first stanza would have a profound effect on the feel of this poem. |