Train Tracks

by Lady Nik   Mar 17, 2011


Single file iron roads
run through my dreams
of you. Loud and
stern straight unturned
wake me up morning
sun.

Burning against my skin
like heat to metal
I remember your
touch. Raindrops
tap the window
where my eyes
search after you.

Single file iron roads
bend and turn in my
mind. Steady like
a beating drum you
never lost rhythm...

but somehow we
lost time.

Running after stationary
while the skies
fill with smoke--
love me forever
the last line you
spoke.

Nights find me
tucked in sheets
of memories I
will never let
go of. Heart,
soul, mind, body
single file iron roads
help me follow you home.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    Wow! this poem in my opinion is by far the best one I have read by you. I cannot fault it. I don't really have a lot to say other than weldone

    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by AJ

    I agree with Nano, using commas in the first stanza would have a profound effect on the feel of this poem.

    "Single file iron roads
    bend and turn in my
    mind. Steady like
    a beating drum you
    never lost rhythm...

    but somehow we
    lost time."

    I sense some very strong musical influence here. I like the use of never losing rhythm and losing time.

    Another good poem!

    +5

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