"this love you killed is killing me"- you have some extraordinary strong emotions you are giving this reader, and it makes a big impact. It is ironic that everything in a sense is still being done for him, tears falling only for him.....and all you need is someone to help you let go, since it keeps haunting back painfully.

Keep holding on....it was incredible to read this piece and be filled with this much sorrow, to look through a person's eyes...you had some really fluent lines.

good job.

A very soulful and heart breaking poem for lost love. I admire the vivid depth the poem leads you too, embroiling the reader to experience the saddest of emotions when we lose someone.