'wanderd' should be 'wandered' I'm guessing? |
Well this is...in one word very different...I'm not sure I really got the poem...the ending I'm guessing its a pregnancy right? And then dead?..'Eaten by worms' right? I mean the body is eaten by worms when we die..its a beautiful piece though..has a kinda tragic tone to it...like always..your metaphors..so unique..so clever..god bless that mind of you...well done! |