The Lion's Tavern (Senyru)

Wow. That was... superb. Conjured up a lot of beautiful images. 5/5

mandy :)

A respectable piece for a respectable man! I think that it's amazing that you chose the Senryu form to describe him. Almost like capturing him in his moment of peace and happiness. Brilliant work!
Take care

Dear Michael,

I had a quick brownse through this man's biography. Is he someone you know?

I like the Senryu, it is very powerful. Somtimes these short verses leave such a deep impression upon the reader:)

I feel this must be a really great singer, so will Youtube on him lateron!

You can always tell when a person does something with all of their heart, you captured that well within your words:)

Well done!

((hugs))

5/5 Ingrid x