Waterfall (Haiku)
by Soft Parade Mar 21, 2011
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A dwarf avalanche |
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13 years ago
Waterfalls are definitely one of the most beautiful acts of nature, as the flows unrestrained and fearless.
I did notice one thing though, your last line has 6 syllables instead of 5. I do know that some haiku's have more or less. But a simple suggestion to you for your last line; instead of "rocky" you could put "stone." Putting your syllable count back to 5.
Enjoyed the read, have a nice day.
