El Prado Triste

by silvershoes   Mar 21, 2011


Here, find me in my ruin
where I lay beneath the frost,
as sheep nuzzle at my sides
and graze on Spanish moss.

His hawk eyes saw into me;
tore a hole within my heart -
now here, love, in the aftermath,
I wonder, is at last a losing art?

The morning dew hangs limply
on gnarled bark of birches,
and each time a droplet falls,
the hollow in me lurches.

A rising sun like an apple slice
cuts into the shadowed land -
at last I find that though I try,
I have not the will to stand.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Amazingly well done 5/5 P.S. I miss your face ;)

  • 13 years ago

    by Poet Keen

    Good

  • 13 years ago

    by Cindy

    What a lovely piece. Congrats on your win :)
    Take care
    Cindy

  • 13 years ago

    by paige

    Simply beautiful.

  • 13 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Congrats on the win first and foremost! I loved your tone throughout this piece, the flowing rhyme that created its own definition. Your words soared! Great structure and imagery playing in my mind, so well deserved!

    God's blessings always...
    ~MaryAnne

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