by padboots Mar 22, 2011
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Silent, tranquil beauty. I see your face. |
by Lofallenve
I love this. |
Wow, this was absolutely brilliant! You've painted the picture of this girl perfectly. I can definitely see her beauty through your words. I like the flow, how it started off pretty smooth, but got kinda jumpy in a sense, when you were completely fixated on her. I'm surprised that this hasn't gotten more comments or votes. Well, I thought this was brilliant. Much enjoyed! |