I really liked this piece. Although the last two lines threw me off. My fav part was 'I may try to kill you, But its only cause I love you.' I felt that was so powerful. For something like love to drive you to kill the person. It's also a little funny. Lol, sorry if that makes me sounds evil. But this poem did was really good, it was very raw and filled so many emotions. A very well written piece. 5/5

I enjoyed every piece of this poem.the imagery is fantastic.i like the way you played with the words and ur ryme was amazing but the last two lines seem a bit force but for it wr awesome