Waterfall

by Lauren Waszkiewicz   Mar 23, 2011


I've planned to make it through the day
Without shedding a single tear;
Even though it hurts to breathe
To be alone this day of the year.
I will make it until midnight.
But if then I feel the need to cry,
I will not make any attempt
To stop the waterfall from my eyes.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I liked this poem. There is only one thing that I would suggest changing.

    "To stop the waterfall from my eyes."

    you might rewrite as

    "To stop the waterfall" I don't think that the part "from my eyes is needed because we already know where it will be coming from.

    other then that it was great and flowed good.
    5/5

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