by Poet on the Piano Mar 24, 2011
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Love, romance /
lasting love
We are both a distant flurry away |
I must say I liked the simple rhyme, it was not overdone at all. I do sort of agree with Britt, you could add more, it felt short, but what you have is excellent so far. I think nature really does bring souls together, I believe that was the intent of your poem. Thus why nature and love go so well together in poetry. Lovely so far, hope you decide to add a little more! |