Wild

Wild

by Peace In The Womb

Mis alas,
escuches
a la belleza
del mar.

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I'm so lucky I talk spanish ne ne ne,wonder opening!

Do not let the waves drumming
speak for your destination;

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This is brilliant,.gives a certain depth...make mes wanna read more!

you are here to tame the horizon
in its bellowing sails & sequence.
Lead the ocean, touch its womb
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Nice twist,makes sense with the title since this is saying to tame the horizon when its the horizon that always tames us.

and take flight with a miracle,
for we were born without eyes
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Damn that 'without eyes' part is thought provoking and can be projected. In so many ways.

but our hearts master a new plan
where sight is not drained,
a cup still full of promise.
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Who would even think about putting 'cup' and "promise' together in a phrase? Smart. You...

Run to me from numerous countries,
lift your ribbons from their spectrum
and sail with me, no longer defined
as a collected whole, but a sky
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You know here..I got shots of the movie the one about around the world in 7 days? Something like that?:/ ...someone going from country to county..beautiful.

made beautiful by love's signal.

Mis alas,
vivas
cada dia
por nuestro sol.

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Ah,my cup of tea....and you know..- usually don't fancy spanish poetry I find it cheesy..but you incorporated it lovely in here... You should put the translation though for those who dont get it...don't leave the poor things haning...nah joke,let them google it! XD mwa!

This was really beautiful, MaryAnne:)

I would love to have had a translation for the Spanish parts, though!

for we were born without eyes
but our hearts master a new plan
where sight is not drained,
a cup still full of promise.

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This was so uplifting, so full of youthful enthusiasm:)

Well done, miracle girl:)

5/5 Ingrid