Well done, good flow and the image is not bad.

Holy....crap.....

I'm one of those people who when they are blown away by a poem I can't really comment right.

I thought this was just incredible! What an amazing poem. You took the saying "family tree" and made it into something totally beautiful and creative. This write was just awesome. Well written, I wouldn't critique a thing!!
Chels

Can't find anything to suggest improvement on this one either. It is a very fine poem with a strong current and a wry ending. Excellent verse!