Comments : Breaking

  • 13 years ago

    by White Orchid

    Wow. I loved this poem. You have reason to be proud. I think i loved every line. Sometimes ppl just dont see how we truly feel and u are around them and it does affect u. I loved this one because the emotion was raw and perfect. Great write. :-)

  • 13 years ago

    by RynZelara

    *nod* Well put, both of you. I completely agree.