Comments : The Child Inside

  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Amazing, I already mentioned the upper case thingy in a previous comment, so for less babbling..aamzing..

    I too wonder what happens to my childhood years, and when did I grow up..

    and I too miss, being silly..
    btw I too hate adults games :)

    5/5
    amazing poem,
    am so proud of your potential in poetry
    well done

  • 13 years ago

    by keithnwv

    So close to home !!!! Where did my time go. Childhood is over but some still play childish games. Great expression of your feelings.... and mine!!

  • 13 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Your title draws the reader in immediately. simple, straight and hard hitting verse. lovely!

    peace,
    shobhana

  • 13 years ago

    by rayre words

    Asking where our childhood went is a popular topic, and you did it well mate. Thanks for sharing the thoughts on PnQ. Best of luck!