Angel Queen!

by Jack Nightengale   Mar 26, 2011


There's a castle high above the clouds,
A castle that makes all the god proud.
In it sit a King without a crown,
Who has the saddest of frowns.
Left in the castle all alone,
with no one else sit beside his throne.

One day happened the most beautiful of scenes,
The most beautiful of Angel flew in and he asked her to be his queen.
To his surprise she accepted his hand,
He is now King over the entire land.
No god could ever manage to make him frown,
Thanks to his Queen nothing could ever bring him down!

Dedicated to the one I love!

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  • 13 years ago

    by TheEnchanted

    It's getting directly into peoples hearts, which is important fora author.
    Keep doing the Great Job!! ;)

  • 13 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This is short but sweet. It has good word choice for the poem itself. A great flow. You begin very plain and end quite plain, yet it is a strong end. The simplicity makes this poem spot on. Great job!

  • 13 years ago

    by mira

    Wow i like this one
    the idea is so nice and you just know how to write it
    bravo

  • 13 years ago

    by GorqeousDisaster

    :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
    this is amazing, i love you so much!

  • 13 years ago

    by Lost Innocence

    Wow...and no it doesn't suck:D......who is the one u love if i may ask??

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