On the verge of insanity

by Meme   Mar 27, 2011


On the verge of insanity
Holding his head high
Saying I will never fall
But those words were lies

On the verge of insanity
She was his other part
It was written in his eyes
And engraved in his heart

On the verge of insanity
Singing under the heavy rain
Playing the rhythm of love
Washing away their pain

On the verge of insanity
He held her hands so tight
He asked, "where are you going?"
She said, "do you remember that night?"

On the verge of insanity
That night was their start
They both started a journey
On the road of torturing art

On the verge of insanity
She thought its easy to let go
She never know that he promised
If she ever falls, he will also fall

On the verge of insanity
That man holding his head high
He fall down the moment she left
And he never again opened his eyes

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© Copyright 2011 by: gIrL
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  • 13 years ago

    by Matthew Schut

    WOW!!!! Amazing write!!! There is so much emotion!! The ending is so sad but written so perfectly!!!

  • 13 years ago

    by Ramblings of an ageing Kid

    A very nice write :D ... It is a bit sad though but very well heart felt

  • 13 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is a very well written poem about someone madly in love and crazy obout a beauty that opened his eyes only to blind him

  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    The title is really interesting !
    the opening is good, the body part was as good..the ending was just perfect,
    i loved the general topic, u know, many people would agree ..just like rabea did :)

    however my only suggestion would be playing with ur upper cases and lower ones.

    other than that I really think u do have a very creative side, and a very emotional one!
    you know how to touch and how to make people relate to ur work..

    5.5!

    N.O is lucky ;)

  • 13 years ago

    by Nomad Being

    You are bless my lady.. you are blessed to write!!!