Very beautiful poem. Love the passion and the emotion put behind it. Truly Amazing!

You are bless my lady.. you are blessed to write!!!

You are bless my lady.. you are blessed to write!!!

The title is really interesting !
the opening is good, the body part was as good..the ending was just perfect,
i loved the general topic, u know, many people would agree ..just like rabea did :)

however my only suggestion would be playing with ur upper cases and lower ones.

other than that I really think u do have a very creative side, and a very emotional one!
you know how to touch and how to make people relate to ur work..

5.5!

N.O is lucky ;)

This is a very well written poem about someone madly in love and crazy obout a beauty that opened his eyes only to blind him

A very nice write :D ... It is a bit sad though but very well heart felt

WOW!!!! Amazing write!!! There is so much emotion!! The ending is so sad but written so perfectly!!!