Comments : As the noose tightens

  • 13 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Benny :[ such sad pieces my friend. Do I need to come up there and give you some skittles and a hug. I hope everything is okay with you. Cheer up. -Nik

  • 13 years ago

    by Love Panda

    Not sure about the ending - maybe its just something im not understanding but i liked the rest of the poem. You have written it morbidly great. :D