I can personally relate to this. my girl friend broke up with me yesterday. thanks for writing this. its nice to know what others feel like... sometimes its hard to feel at all.

~kuro

WOW! all the chosen words really jives and fit in perfectly with the emotions that makes it more stronger and very powerful. I know most people could relate themselves with the scenario of separation...I love every stanza...

How could a four letter word mean so much? So true that when somebody breaks up with there love, they force the other person to blame themselves almost. Even if you don't want to you search back to find your mistake that inevitably led you to this. If we aren't strong enough we'll let the misery infect our hearts and change the person that we truly are just to try and make someone else happy.

You've always been a great writer, but I can truly feel and see in your words that you're getting better! The best thing a writer can do is relate to there readers, write what they feel. Excellent job as always 5/5