Existence falling

Your poems are so similar, i feel like i have already read this. The first line was brilliant, it really did it for me.

(Our) existence is a mysterious thing. I love how you made the reader see through your perspective. The confident tone of the narrator also makes this piece believable. Great job.
-X

"Existence is a bead of light
relative in size.
As tiny as it is infinite,
and we are all inside."

In those four lines you explained existence to a T. Beautifully said. :)

Your opening was awesome. I love that first line. Great imagination.

I love the metaphor you read through this piece, it is deeply thoughtful and intriguing, this idea of existence at our hands, light unmeasured yet small to even fathom.

Amazing work, keep penning!

God bless!
~MaryAnne