Existence is a bead of light
Relevant in size.
As tiny as it is infinite,
And we are all inside

^ I just simply want to comment on this stanza right here.. I absolutely loved it! What a good metaphor! When I read this I was hopeing this piece would be a bit longer becuase that stanza really drew me in and I wanted to see where you were going with this! The second stanza confused me just a bit, but thats just me i usually get confused easily lol

very good piece though! I enjoyed the read!
Chelsy

If you don’t mind being confused… but are itching for more.

Simply read more of my poems.

Especially...
Exfinity
A perfect circle
Matter and gravity
Perfect chaos
Infinite matter
Shine
Shine through

I love the metaphor you read through this piece, it is deeply thoughtful and intriguing, this idea of existence at our hands, light unmeasured yet small to even fathom.

Amazing work, keep penning!

God bless!
~MaryAnne

Your opening was awesome. I love that first line. Great imagination.

"Existence is a bead of light
relative in size.
As tiny as it is infinite,
and we are all inside."

In those four lines you explained existence to a T. Beautifully said. :)

(Our) existence is a mysterious thing. I love how you made the reader see through your perspective. The confident tone of the narrator also makes this piece believable. Great job.
-X

Your poems are so similar, i feel like i have already read this. The first line was brilliant, it really did it for me.