Amazing..you described things that truly you missed it...it is clearly stated and flows smoothly...well-penned",

Memories are somewhat bittersweet. This piece allowed the reader to see a part of your past, and get a sense of what you were feeling. It is very descriptive---
"A sweet hand on my shoulder,
While sitting at the computer.
The stroking of my arm,
While watching TV.
Arms around my waist,
While at the sink."
And very emotional---
"And appreciation for breakfast,
Not quite the same.
I know you love me.
Don't get me wrong.
But it amazes me how important,
These missed things can be."
Really amazing piece. Keep writing :)
-X

Sorry. Double posted^^