Comments : As We Dance

  • 6 years ago

    by Maher

    You know, there's always poems on this site that get missed for whatever reason. I think this is one of them. I like to read people's older work because I find that the best and most honest stuff is usually found toward the beginning of when people sign up to this site.

    Point being, I like this. That ending was unexpected. It's short, sweet and to a twist of a point. You might want to and an extra 'o' to that 'too' though.

    Thanks for sharing this with us all :)