Tiny Little Fractures

by Lady Nik   Apr 1, 2011


One becomes a million
as the day melts away, like
crushed umber candle
wax, due to an overwhelming
uprising of rushing heat, all
causing an equilibrium within
the mind...

Temptation--
the sweetest of
all sins. Love the deadliest way
to live. Trapped in a labyrinth
of simple gestures mixed with
blunt facial expressions, that
hold too much emotional
content for the heart to bear
alone.

Say I love you...just this once

lessen the burden on my spirit
that no longer lives beside you. My
soul can not exist in a realm
of diseased tranquility, manipulated
by the broken promises of yesterday.
The totality of my being has shattered
at my calling from the angels...
leaving behind tiny little fractures

my goodbye to you.

*This was a poem I used for a Club Contest awhile ago. I never posted it...so here it is.*

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  • 13 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    The title was catchy, and the poem did it justice, it flowed so well, and the emotion was raw and so strong, wow, i loved this one loads

    Tara

  • 13 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    This is surely going to be the one i would feature as one of the best from you. Awesome right from the start...amazing write. Great choice of words and beautifully written.

    Loved it right from the moment i read title.

    all the best and take care

  • 13 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Temptation--
    the sweetest of
    all sins. Love the deadliest way
    to live. Trapped in a labyrinth
    of simple gestures mixed with
    blunt facial expressions, that
    hold too much emotional
    content for the heart to bear
    alone.

    ^^ I absolutely loved this stanza right here!...I thought it was so poetically written if you know what I mean. It was a great description of temptation , but with this poetic twist on it! I just loved it!

    This poem as a whole was awesome! Your word choice was incredible, I loved the flow, the title, and the sadness that I could feel reading this.
    Good work!
    Chels

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