Temptation--
the sweetest of
all sins. Love the deadliest way
to live. Trapped in a labyrinth
of simple gestures mixed with
blunt facial expressions, that
hold too much emotional
content for the heart to bear
alone.

^^ I absolutely loved this stanza right here!...I thought it was so poetically written if you know what I mean. It was a great description of temptation , but with this poetic twist on it! I just loved it!

This poem as a whole was awesome! Your word choice was incredible, I loved the flow, the title, and the sadness that I could feel reading this.
Good work!
Chels

This is surely going to be the one i would feature as one of the best from you. Awesome right from the start...amazing write. Great choice of words and beautifully written.

Loved it right from the moment i read title.

all the best and take care

The title was catchy, and the poem did it justice, it flowed so well, and the emotion was raw and so strong, wow, i loved this one loads

Tara