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by Max Krakers Apr 2, 2011 category : Sadness, depression / other
Bubbles at the surface, ripples in the tide. A figure soon emerges, a youthful ocean bride. Crying but determined, she reaches out to me. Her body cold and lonely, trapped inside the sea. Her touch so warm and soothing, her lips so close to mine. They gently touch each other, the feeling is divine. Slowly her grip lightens, ending our embrace. Teary-eyed and happy, with a smile across her face. The water soon engulfs her, returns her to the deep. Her tear-filled eyes still glisten, as she slowly falls asleep. Her tears lost to the ocean, where they shall never dry. But I'll always remember, that I saw a mermaid cry.
by Amberinaa
This is beautiful. Thanks for sharing. xo
by Jenni
Nice rhyme and flow, i also liked the descriptions, they help people get into the poem and imagine things better. Also the emotions are deep and pure, really touching. Thanks for sharing :)