Comments : Casting Charms

  • 13 years ago

    by silvershoes

    Stop being such a goddamn poet! Love your work - I'm your biggest fan ;) Don't know how you come up with such personal, perfect touches, flow, and imagery... but I freaking love it. Don't stop, can't stop, won't stop.

    Too much caffeine. Bye now.

  • 13 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    One of the most beautiful,
    and most perfectly written,
    poems I have ever seen..

    Thank You.

  • 13 years ago

    by Jordan

    "where your jaw dips into your neck, where
    the woodsmoke smell pools just
    for me to kiss"

    Cold shivers.

    This poem made me want to experience natural beauty. It made a lot of feelings well up in me. Like always, your words have stolen my heart.

    Always write.

  • 13 years ago

    by Kiko

    This is one of those poems that is just fun to read over and over. The words have a playfulness to them and they conjure up all sorts of fragrant imagery.

  • 13 years ago

    by adrienne

    There has got to be more spunk in that peom you have got to feel it inside of you work harder. Put something deeper in that peom make it sound realistic if you know what i mean.