by Switchblade89 Apr 4, 2011
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
The sweetness of your voice lifted my spirit when I was down, |
by Jenni
I think that this poem is really heartfelt and the flow did not get interrupted too badly in the middle. The emotions in a poem matter way more than the flow anyway. The detailed description portrayed a vivid image and it was obvious that you still love the person but you feel guilty about what happened. Your choice of words were captivating and the rhyme was good aswell. |
by annie doss
I liked it. i thought it was pretty good=) |