I'm lost in darkness

by Switchblade89   Apr 4, 2011


The sweetness of your voice lifted my spirit when I was down,
your heart connected to mine, our love echoed in the same sound,
What better way to live then to know I was adored so by you darling,
You were my princess...I tried so hard to be your prince charming,
I gave you the key, my heart was, and is yours forever,
this can't be how the love story ends, It's supposed to end together.

But as time went on, I changed in a way I shouldn't,
I turned into all the others like I promised that I wouldn't,
and with that instant I drove the stake in a little further into my heart,
Losing the one thing that actually made the life I read in books and watched in movies start.
I finally had it all, nothing was going to make me feel more complete,
then knowing one day I would have my love next to me as I sleep,
and yet here I am, alone in this bed as I've always been and will always be,
who knew that the one thing that would drive my greatest heart thief away...was me.

kinda choppy in the middle but I had a headache when I wrote this.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Jenni

    I think that this poem is really heartfelt and the flow did not get interrupted too badly in the middle. The emotions in a poem matter way more than the flow anyway. The detailed description portrayed a vivid image and it was obvious that you still love the person but you feel guilty about what happened. Your choice of words were captivating and the rhyme was good aswell.

    I am sorry and hope that you two will be able to solve it all.

  • 13 years ago

    by annie doss

    I liked it. i thought it was pretty good=)