I really like this poem cause I see it as a really original piece. The story behind the poem is really interesting and I'm sure those who play instruments will get this poem a lot more then those who don't, like me. :P I still found it creative and your rhyming in this poem is really good and it didn't seem forced at all giving it a really good flow and foundation.

I guess the only negative thing about this poem is maybe how, like I said, I don't play an instrument so I don't get as much out of it but I'm sure there are those who get a ton out of this poem. So I'm not complaining.

In all, you have done a great job and I love the emotions you have put into this poem as you probably know best how it feels to have no one to play with maybe at times. Very unique and creative as well! Great job and keep writing.

:) you even brought an instrument to life by
giving it character and feelings; drawing a
picture of a lone character who cannot survive without love..I liked it :)