A Smile From Yesterday

This is deffinatly one of my fave's, in fact im sure i have a few fave's off you. So very well donr indeed. You really do amaze me with your writting skills and word formations..your writting just seems to be so perfect, i wish i was as good as you. I struggle with finding what fits together nicly, you seem like it just flows from you. I love reading your work - did i mention that already!? :D

Very good poem. I can totally relate. Sometimes less is more and i felt that in this poem. I thought it was short but the emotion in it was powerful. :-)

Past is past and its memories bring tears as
well as smiles to our face..touching..

A very sweet poem that definitely gets the emotions across of being in love. You seem to be able to vent very easily and this poem displays that. The only downside I saw with this poem is the rhyming. It was forced in areas and that made the flow go off several times for me. Also the poem is really cliched and I have seen tons of these poems written all in different ways.

I know what I am saying may sound crude but it is truthful and its not to say that I don't like your poem cause I really do. You get your emotions across, its just that I would like to see you try something outside your box like maybe a freestyle or even a form. Try and break away from rhyming in one poem and just vent away! :]

All in all, I still say you did a great job and the poem was filled with your heart and also deep meaning as every poem does. You have a talent and I hope to see you use it to the fullest of your abilities. Great job and keep writing.