A very sweet poem that definitely gets the emotions across of being in love. You seem to be able to vent very easily and this poem displays that. The only downside I saw with this poem is the rhyming. It was forced in areas and that made the flow go off several times for me. Also the poem is really cliched and I have seen tons of these poems written all in different ways.

I know what I am saying may sound crude but it is truthful and its not to say that I don't like your poem cause I really do. You get your emotions across, its just that I would like to see you try something outside your box like maybe a freestyle or even a form. Try and break away from rhyming in one poem and just vent away! :]

All in all, I still say you did a great job and the poem was filled with your heart and also deep meaning as every poem does. You have a talent and I hope to see you use it to the fullest of your abilities. Great job and keep writing.

Past is past and its memories bring tears as
well as smiles to our face..touching..

Very good poem. I can totally relate. Sometimes less is more and i felt that in this poem. I thought it was short but the emotion in it was powerful. :-)

This is deffinatly one of my fave's, in fact im sure i have a few fave's off you. So very well donr indeed. You really do amaze me with your writting skills and word formations..your writting just seems to be so perfect, i wish i was as good as you. I struggle with finding what fits together nicly, you seem like it just flows from you. I love reading your work - did i mention that already!? :D