Comments : In Your Passion

  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    I read this before, but forgot to comment after delaying it lol,
    so ya after reading again, i seriously think that the voice used here is just amazing, ...

    i love how you twist your tone, and how you flip your attitude and how you speak of personal then to general ...it makes the poem interesting and more appealing 2 the readers..

    the title was really catchy for me lol
    and so was the sunless poem..will talk about that later on :P
    five!