Comments : Springtime

  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    You are a piece of art,
    a great field of poems and such
    a master piece of a poets pen!
    you draw some of the most magnificent
    poems...

    hats off!!
    FIVE

  • 13 years ago

    by momopixie18

    Beautiful poem, nice job, i love spring

  • 13 years ago

    by Cindy

    Michael......what a beautiful springtime poem.

    The grass grows as the green towers
    In the trees over the flowers
    Mother nature has these powers
    Many a free feathered bird sings,
    As if to rise on angels wings

    I can imagine the trees and fields of green grass and the singing birds. All the newly born babies bringing their heads out of their nests :) Spring is a time for rebirth a new beginning and a time for love to blossom. Great imagery.
    Excellent job!
    Take care
    Cindy

  • 13 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    I wished I had know you already posted this zejel. I would like to have nominated it. (my bad, it deserved to be seen.) You should have included the (zejel) at the end of the title. You done the form justice and I am proud of you for taking on the challenge and doing it so well.
    Excellent Job!

    Thanks,
    Kay