Comments : Teenage Dirtbag

  • 13 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    This was beautifully written, filled with raw emotion. This story has been told from so many point of views. I really liked the line "locker love" a great way to describe it. Clever indeed. I have to say that I just loved that last word as well. The structure of it fit wonderfully. Having it spaced apart from the rest and being such a simple but strong word... was amazing.

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by XxLastHopexX

    Such a sad poem, I could feel your pain as I read it. Well done.