This was beautifully written, filled with raw emotion. This story has been told from so many point of views. I really liked the line "locker love" a great way to describe it. Clever indeed. I have to say that I just loved that last word as well. The structure of it fit wonderfully. Having it spaced apart from the rest and being such a simple but strong word... was amazing. |
by XxLastHopexX
Such a sad poem, I could feel your pain as I read it. Well done. |