by Sylvia
Meena, nice work. I like how you used the seasons in this, original and seemed like a natural thing to say, not forced at all. Words that give your heart and soul to another, asking in return for them never to let you go. Good job as usual. |
by Lady Nik
Loved the "lover of my soul" part. Very beautiful piece Meena :] I loved the imagery and the mood this poem put me in. Good job deary. -Nik |
by anand singh
Your expession of overwhelming love runs deep in this beautiful piece. |
by Cindy
Meena |
Simply out of this world. So beautifully written. Best piece to read..anytime of the day :) |