This was a very interesting piece. I liked how you put a different view on Alice in ~Wonderland~ to Alice in Nightmareland. Clever of you. Your style is very free. You really put what you think and feel down. Each word carries power.

5/5

I definitely was astounding by the creativity of this. Excellent way to embrace the chaos and confusion that is Alice in Wonderland in a dark way. Beautifully done! 5/5

My gosh this piece is creative. So descriptive and my gosh its captivating. I mean its creepy as hell, but it is penned magnificently well. The word choice here is so strong and the mood set up a really interesting tone.

MRK

5/5