I don't know if I truly enjoyed the repetition much, it worked but I don't think it added that extra strength.

I love your thoughts here and how they echo. That your deepest heart knows when she is near and the beat reverberates...You are strong yourself and this poem speaks so, with inspiration that we cannot find time to judge in this world...you are so right, love never judges, it is THE truth.

Thank you so much for your kind and honest comments, you know always they are greatly appreciated!

Take care always,
MaryAnne

Gees yaki, I don't know what it is about your poetry, but I just absolutely love it. First off, excellent qoute! I can see how inspiring that was :)

This poem was filled with such compassion, i could read it and feel the sincerity in the tone.

that I only know of love when she is next to me
that I only know of fear when she is far away
that I only know of loneliness when I let go of her hand..

^ this was just amazing girl..I can't tell you how much I loved it!! I could go on and on about those 3 lines but one word sums it up, AMAZING

Great write as always doll!
Chels