Listen

by Cupids Got A Gun   Apr 7, 2011


Listen to me and what i have to say
Don't shut down
Don't run away
If i really matter to you
Tell me your feelings
Show me you care
There's no hiding anymore
We crossed that line
Now we're here
I'm scared too i can see your fear
It's all a game to you
As i was afraid
I never mattered to you
You left me a lone broken and betrayed
I love you so much it kills
It past way beyond hurt months ago
Listen to me hear me now
I try to talk to you
You don't make a sound
You leave me to sort this out my own
And i can't even tell you my true feelings
Those 3 words too revealing
Too much for you
Because you lie, its you
So listen to me hear me now
I can no longer hold this in
I deserve better then this pretend.

4.7.2011

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  • 13 years ago

    by momopixie18

    Rhymed so well, which made the flow nice, and a good relatable topic

  • 13 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Hi tara :)

    I found this poem to be really sad :(

    I think a lot of people can relate to this poem. ANyone whose been in love and hurt before.
    I'd only advise you to break this up into stanza it'd be easier to read and maybe put some commas in it...other than that I enjoyed this write :)

  • 13 years ago

    by mira

    Nice write

  • 13 years ago

    by Hallucinostic

    Very good. :)

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